Black Swan

Natalie Portman plays Nina Sayers, a ballet dancer who gets her break when she is cast as the lead in Swan Lake by company director Thomas Leroy (Vincent Cassel). Nina initially can play the White Swan role in the ballet perfectly, but being able to play the Black Swan requires her to "let go" of herself during her dancing. However, as she "lets go" during performances, she also finds herself letting go of life generally, and (quite literally) becoming the Black Swan.

From very early on Nina discovers scratches on her back (the beginnings of wings), and her skin occasionally ripples with a poultry-like texture! Psychologically, having been raised by an overbearing mother (a failed dancer), Nina finds herself rebelling slightly; wanting privacy at home, going out drinking late with fellow dancer (and understudy for lead Swan) Lily (Mila Kunis). She also starts begins to fantasize, having sex with Lily, and imagining that Lily is trying to get Nina out of the picture so that she can have the title role. This culminates in the final performance when Nina believes that she has stabbed Lily to death in her changing room. Nina then dances the Black Swan perfectly, but before the show's climax realises that she has not stabbed Lily but herself! In the final act of the ballet when the White Swan jumps to her death, the gut wound she inflicted on herself is suddenly obvious and Nina dies having finished the "Perfect" dance.

I don't know anything about ballet, and did not know the story of Swan Lake, though a very neat summary is given by Vincent Cassel towards the beginning of the film. Natalie is very good, I'm not familiar with all her work but I guess this could be her biggest lead role, and she carries it very well; completely erasing any Star Wars doubts. She did have a major role in V for Vendetta, where I also thought she was very good, but it wasn't really her film; and I'm not sure about Closer as I haven't seen it. Black Swan perhaps is her most mature performance, proving that she can cope with demanding roles.

Vincent Cassel has an influential role, but not a major role; yet still seems to have quite an off-screen presence that drives Natalie's character in a particular direction. It was slightly disorientating seeing him in this because I am half way through watching Mesrine: Killer Instinct, in which Vincent Cassel plays a notorious French gangster. My review will follow later as there are actually 2 parts to the film, and I've only watched the first. Consequently, the confusion remains: French Gangster, or Ballet instructor?!

Technically, Darren Aronofsky like using mirrors in this film. A lot. It does work, showing the two sides of Nina's character and how it is becoming fractioned and disjointed. Most obviously of course when dancing in the studio, and the reflection of Nina continues dancing for just second after she has actually stopped dancing. I did think on occasion that half of the special effects budget must have been spent on removing the reflections of the camera crew as Natalie danced around the studio in front of loads of mirrors!

(A fly on the wall watches Natalie get ready)

Actually, there are scenes demonstrating Nina's transformation to a Swan, where she pulls at a raggedy finger nail and rips a huge bit of skin off her finger! Very reminiscent of Brundle-fly! Seeing Natalie dressed like this reminds me; near the beginning of the film there is a shot from the stands of the studio looking down on all the dancers training as Vincent Cassel approaches; really reminded me of Enter the Dragon as the competitors first arrive on Han's Island and they look down on hundreds of people practising their Kung Fu! Mmmm. There were lots of mirrors used there too!

Anyway! Russ recommends seeing it. Black Swan that is. Possibly even deserving of an Academy Award. Also see Enter the Dragon if you haven't!

I am Iron Man!

Iron Man was on telly the other week, and then what should pop through our letterbox from LoveFilm but Iron Man 2! So I thought that I'd review them together; two birds, one stone and all that. I'm guessing that most people are aware of the story so I will quickly blast through the plot.

Tony Stark (Robert Downey Jr) of Stark Industries (arms suppliers) is the son of the company founder, robotics genius, and all round suave guy. While demonstrating the latest weaponry in Afghanistan he is kidnapped by terrorists, during which he is wounded in the chest. To prevent shrapnel from burying into his heart and killing him a device is planted in his chest. Tony uses this to power a suit of armour to affect his escape. Back home, Tony uses his robotic skills to upgrade the chest piece and the suit of armour, adding fire-power and much computer wizardry. He then uses the suit to fight evil, starting with the corrupt head of Stark Industries: Obadiah (Jeff Bridges).

When I first heard of this film I assumed it was a version of the novel by Ted Hughes I read as a kid. When I found out this wasn't the case I was first disappointed, and then, having seen all the hype about the film, very wary, and stayed away. Hype does that to me, I didn't see Moulin Rouge for years for the same reason. When I finally did see Iron Man, I was very pleasantly surprised. Robert Downey Jr is perfect for this role, smooth and arrogant without being smarmy and annoying. Jeff Bridges is great as usual, and great support from Gwyneth Paltrow as well.

                                                         Was that my White Russian?

While watching the beginning of the second film, actually I might say up to about 45 min or something, I thought it was a bit flat. I thought that this could be because for a lot of these hero-style films, the first film is usually more interesting as the main character discovers their super-powers. Mmmm. I was about to back up that statement with examples, but could only come up with Spider-man really. X-2 better than X-men, Superman 2, Hellboy II!

Anyway, I thought the first 45 min were a bit aimless, until Sam L Jackson showed up and told Tony to stop arse-ing about. At that point the film developed some plot and became a whole lot more enjoyable, though I was confused with why they replaced Terrence Howard with Don Cheadle as Rhodey. Jon Favreau has done a great job with these two films, including a massive cameo for himself (actually I think it goes beyond a cameo).

Best bits:

Mickey Rourke slicing Grand Prix cars up in Monaco with his electric tentacle things.

Tony creating a Small Hadron Collider in his apartment to create a new element!

Any section of film with AC/DC playing in the background.

Baracoota Design - From logos to invitations, she does it all!

Okay, now this might not be in my 'blog' range, but it's very important to me.
I have a designer friend, she's setting up a new business and is very keen to start working straight away. Her name is Alana, and she has just completed her Advanced Diploma in Graphic's Design. This happens to be a remarkable qualification which, in my opinion, deserves it's uttermost attention.

She designs a lot of things, and has gotten a lot of attention for her work which she has done.
Want a logo designed? An invitation perhaps...or a poster? She is the woman for you, she doesn't disappoint with her work, just like I don't disappoint you with my blog. :)

For looks on her work that she has done visit this site:

http://www.ubgraphics.com.au/?page_id=164

You like it? Go to her facebook page where her contact details are, don't worry, she won't bite. Hehe. If you need something designed, contact her and she'll give you her full attention.

http://www.facebook.com/#!/pages/Baracoota-Design/189469311068926?v=wall

Even if you don't want to see this, just a have look anyway. If you like what you see then go right ahead and tell your friends all about it. :)

Keep writing my bloggers! :D

My second promotional poster for my novel.

This is the second one...If you haven't seen the first one,, just look below the first post here.
This poster now has clues to what my novel is about. If you can find them, let me know in the comments, I'd like to see how observative my fans are.

Murder Case: The Secret, Book Poster. Tell me what you think?

For those who have read my first three chapters already for my upcoming novel, Murder Case: The Secret, I have made a promotional poster to encourage more readers and get a feel of what my novel will be like. What you see in this poster, is what you will get. :)

Tell me what you guys think of it. If it needs any kind of improvement, I'm open to all ideas. =D

The King's Speech

On the face of it, a film about a guy with a stammer and his struggle to overcome said speech defect so that he can speak in public, doesn't sound like it would particularly get bums on seats. But make the guy Prince Albert of York (soon to be King George VI), get Colin Firth to play him, and fill the role of the elocution teacher with the excellent Geoffrey Rush; then play the film against the backdrop of George V's death, the abdication of Edward VIII and imminent war with Germany in 1939 and the result is a great film full of many dramatic and funny moments.

Essentially; Prince Albert has suffered from a stammer from a young age, but now that he is expected to make public appearances and speeches, his difficulty in speaking is quite a hindrance. Having seen many speech therapists his wife Elizabeth (played by Helena Bonham Carter, who is also excellent) finds a therapist with some unorthodox methods. This therapist Lionel Logue (Rush), finds it hard to get to know "Bertie", but following the death of his father George V, he starts to open up to Lionel.

With the Death of George V, Bertie's brother Edward (Guy Pearce) becomes King, but his desire to marry a twice-divorced woman (not favourable in the eyes of The Establishment) results in his abdication of the throne. Bertie is therefore crowned King, not as Albert (considered to Germanic to be appropriate in 1936) but as George VI.

The new King struggles to find confidence to speak at his coronation, but doesn't have to say very much anyway. His big moment comes when he is to be broadcast live to the country and all the colonies following the outbreak of World War 2. This is the climax of the film, and of course he gets through the speech without stammering, but also not without dramatic pauses as he struggles for control.

I really did enjoy this film. The cast is superb. Colin Firth does deserve his Golden Globe, but I think Geoffrey Rush is at least as good as Firth. Helena Bonham Carter is also great (quite a departure for her, not being in a Tim Burton film!). She really seems to wear the trousers in the first part of the film where Bertie comes across as being a bit self pitying. Derek Jacobi puts in a solid performance as Archbishop Cosmo Lang, but is only ever a minor character. And I must not forget Timothy Spall as Winston Churchill, with surely an award-winning scowl if ever there was one!

I feel the cinematography is worth a comment. The overall palette of the film was very mute, even in some of the very opulent rooms inevitable in a film about Royals. I'm not sure if this was to reflect Bertie's overall mood as he is constantly struggling against his speech impediment; or rather to reflect the mood of the time leading up to war with Hitler. Or maybe neither and I haven't a clue what I'm talking about.

There were also a noticeable number of scenes (particularly if characters were sitting down) which were framed so that their heads mostly occupied the lower middle and left part of the screen. This left a lot of wall in the background which was made far more obvious. And I really can't think of a reason why some scenes would be shot like this. Maybe this is just me being weird, or perhaps I need my eyes corrected! But did anyone else notice this? Danny Cohen does have a BAFTA nomination for this work, so maybe no-one else did notice it!

Despite my potential weirdness I thought the film was excellent. Fantastic that us Brits can make a film about something so quintessentially British, and do it bloody well! What ho!

Dr.No

Having never forked out for a Bond boxed set (they just keep making 'em!) I watched Dr. No on video! Yes, one of those old fashioned mechanical type things with tape in them and everything! What's more it wasn't even a bought video, it was taped off TV years ago when ITV had a "Double O Heaven" season. Still, the quality wasn't all that bad, and it certainly didn't spoil my enjoyment of this classic film at all.

First thing to notice is that there is no title song. This of course makes sense being the first film, the songs wouldn't really get going in terms of James Bond themes until Goldfinger, though I'm certainly not forgetting the mellifluous voice of Matt Munro's From Russia with Love. The credits start with the James Bond theme, before degenerating (sorry) into some sort of Latin drum beat thing over which we see silhouettes of dancing women, soon to become a staple of 007 film intros. This then becomes a reggae version of Three Blind Mice!!! WTF?! Oh I see, the film starts with three "blind" guys. Still, a tenuous link, and a bit of a comedown from the dramatic James Bond theme of a minute ago.

There were two things that really struck me about this film. Firstly, how slick it was. The plot moved effortlessly on, gliding from one one location/encounter to the next. This was all helped by the fact that Bond is always one step ahead of the villains, and of the viewer I felt sometimes! Now I'm no expert in 60s films, but I imagine that in 1962 this slickness could have been quite striking, to me it is reminiscent of Bullitt, which would not be seen for another 6 years.

The second thing was just how perfect Sean Connery is as Bond. He just slips right in there like a hand into an expensive Italian leather shoe. No, just me? Moving swiftly on. It also made me realise that Daniel Craig's Bond is much more of a return to the "Thinking on his feet" Bond rather than the "Rely on invisible cars and explosive watches" Bond that we were becoming accustomed to. I had thought that this was a reflection of the popularity of the Bourne films, but now I see that is how Bond used to be (and he's better this way I think). In Dr. No, Bond is constantly reading every situation, monitoring all the players, and dispatches henchmen very efficiently, hardly breaking sweat; except for when a big hairy spider is crawling up him.

I also think it's great that Honey Ryder (Ursula Andress) is no-one in particular (not a secret agent, or a nuclear physicist, or some billionaire's wife who's just being mischievous) she's just out, on the beach picking up shells; Honey: Are you looking for shells too? Bond: No, I'm just looking. That is of course before she gets caught up in all the adventure.

The other two things I thought were great were: the first time Bond says: "Bond, James Bond", it sounds completely natural and not clichéd or unnecessarily shoe-horned in. And also I'd forgotten what SPECTRE was an acronym for. SPecial Executive for Counter-intelligence, Terrorism, Revenge and Extortion. Fantastic!

Lily Allen's Sleek Bob Hairstyle

Lily Allen's Sleek Bob Hairstyle it a baby style hair cut.

Jessica Stroup's Short Hairstyle

Jessica Stroup's Short Hairstyle it is also short hair cut style. it simple and soft style. hair look very short and nic nerro .

Emily Browning's Short Hairstyle

Emily Browning's Short Hairstyle it is a short haircut style,it is very soft and short hair it look like real motion for hair style.

How to Cut Bob Hairstyle 2010

How to Cut Bob Hairstyle

The right side is the feature side where the concaved effect is most prominent. The right sides length flows down with the jaw line, blending from short textured lengths to longer piecey strands at the very front 2011. The right side shows that various blonde shades through the hair gives the hair a natural blonde finish. The longer pieces feature blonder highlights to help frame the longer pieces at the front. 2010 Left Side: The left hand side has the graduating short textured lengths but the front has jaw line graduated length which sits neatly tucked behind the ears, leaving the right side to be the main feature with its longer length. The shorter side looks very natural, with the darker tone from the back showing at the very back sides and following up to lighter tones at the top where the blonde highlights give the hair a sun kissed finish.

127 Hours

Aron Ralston's story of having to hack his own arm off after he became trapped in the Utah Canyonlands was presumably very well known, even before the great Danny Boyle got hold of the story to make into a film. The plot doesn't really need that much explaining, but I must stress that my view is based on the film, as I haven't read Aron's book "Between a Rock and a Hard Place" yet.

Essentially, Aron went away for a weekend to go mountain biking, hiking and climbing in Canyonlands in Utah. After having spent an afternoon with two girls he met while hiking they head off their way and Aron continues on his way to a big "Drop-off", where a smaller canyon opens out into a much larger canyon.  However, as he quickly descends into a narrow gorge he slips, dislodges a large rock which, when he lands on the canyon floor, traps his right hand against the canyon wall. Aron is stuck, completely isolated, low on food and water and unable to free his hand. So after 5 soul-searching days (127 hours in fact) of trying one way or another to shift the rock, he finally amputates his own arm so that he can get home.

The majority of the film is just Aron (James Franco), in a canyon, experiencing various emotions from disbelief, through anger, frustration, despair, desperation, and finally determination. Wow! James Franco is fantastic. There isn't a minute when you don't believe that he is there experiencing all of this. I thought the film-making was also phenomenal to make this story so gripping (a man stuck in a hole for 5 days!), and I don't think there was a single camera angle that Danny Boyle didn't use!

The story was well spaced out with flashbacks of family, past girlfriend, and how he feels he has let people down; perhaps that's too strong but certainly the impression is that he feels he has not given those close to him the love that he can give. Finally it is the thought of his family, and the desire to start his own family that cements in his head that he must amputate himself to get out of there. I think I have heard of some people feeling very sick and grossed-out by the amputation scene. Maybe I've seen too much horror, but I thought is was subtly done, far worse for me was before he fell into the canyon knowing that something awful was going to happen. Much like Touching the Void.

The other very similar part to Touching the Void was Aron getting the music to Scooby Doo in his head! This is because the girls he had met on the first day had mentioned that they were throwing a party that night and there would be a huge inflatable Scooby Doo there. So part of the delirium Aron experience was having the Scooby Doo music going round and round his head. Very much like Joe Simpson thinking he was going to die to "Brown Girl in the Ring" by Boney M!

Anyway, I thought the film was great, brilliantly made, a great example of how filming one man in isolation can still be gripping. I've heard great things about Buried as well, and if it's half as good as this is, it must be a good film.

Rihanna's Short Chic Hairstyle

Victoria Beckham Short Haircut

Like a new woman" -- that's how Posh feels with her new blonde hair, according to an interview she gave British paper The Sun. The do is for a new ad campaign for the US launch of her and hubby David's Intimately Beckham perfumes.

Front: The front of the hairstyle shows off asymmetrical lengths and the right side is much longer then the left. The left side part has slight bangs which fall to the right where it blends into a longer length which goes down to chin level, giving the front of the hair length and also a feminine touch. A textured finish adds a piecey look and also a voluminous finish. The front of the hair is foiled with light and golden pieces which gives Victoria a sun kissed look, perfect for her new Hollywood location.

Back: From the back, this short hairstyle looks totally different then the front. From the back hairline the hair is graduated up with heavily chipped into ends which add a very textured but blending finish. From the crown to the top-back part of the neck the lengths are sliced to carry on a textured and full finish. At the very bottom to the mid back the color of the hair is a dark golden blonde, and from the crown to the mid back, the hair has blonde foils which have a piecey finish on top of the darker blonde.

Right Side: The right side is the feature side where the concaved effect is most prominent. The right sides length flows down with the jaw line, blending from short textured lengths to longer piecey strands at the very front. The right side shows that various blonde shades through the hair gives the hair a natural blonde finish. The longer pieces feature blonder highlights to help frame the longer pieces at the front.

Left Side: The left hand side has the graduating short textured lengths but the front has jaw line graduated length which sits neatly tucked behind the ears, leaving the right side to be the main feature with its longer length. The shorter side looks very natural, with the darker tone from the back showing at the very back sides and following up to lighter tones at the top where the blonde highlights give the hair a sun kissed finish.

Andrew's Short Hairstyle

This is just to bland of a hair style for me. i think you would look really cute if you did one of those wind swept off to the side cuts. I am only eleven and if you did one of those off to the side- wind swept cuts, i would so love you!

Jenna Jameson Sexy Concave Bob Hairstyle

Jenna turned heads on the red carpet with this sexy 'do! Her hair was cut into a sexy concave bob and no layers were added to create a sharper finish. This is a great hairstyle for oval face shapes but should be avoided by longer face shapes as the protruding pieces at the front will create a longer looking appearance.

Six Ways To Give Your Skin a Winter GlowThere are several

There are several things to love about the colder weather: hot chocolate, shearling-lined boots, oversized sweaters. What's not so fab? The dull, pasty skin from the season's chilly, dry air.

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Kim Kardashian: Why My Lips Look Plumper

has recently been plagued by rumors that she received filler injections in her lower lip -- but according to the 30-year-old reality star, her perfect pout is completely natural.

"Trust me, I've tried Botox on the show," she tells Extra. "I'm the first one to talk about anything that I do. It really pisses me off that all of these plastic surgery rumors are always linked to me."

PHOTOS: Stars who've gone under the knife

Still, the Kourtney and Kim Take New York star admits that her lips do look plumper as of late -- but not because of any cosmetic enhancements.

"I have the flu. I'm puffy and swollen, and I have no make-up on. Why would I just do my bottom lip?" she asks.

VIDEO: Kim Kardashian gets Botox injections

Upon seeing herself in photos, Kardashian noticed that her "top lip was smaller and my bottom lip was huge. I'm thinking, 'That would be the worst doctor on earth to do one lip and not the other.'"

And don't expect to see the E! reality star's lips looking any fuller in the future, either.

PHOTOS: Plastic surgery disasters!

"It's definitely something that I would never do," she says of getting filler injections again. "I think my lips are big enough for my taste level."

Kate Takes Her Eight to New Zealand

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The adventure continues: Now Kate Gosselin takes her brood to

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[Kate's bodyguard] Steve Nield - who is from New Zealand - will also be ... I think its Great all the places Kate is taking her children

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Kate Gosselin takes her kids on a sightseeing adventure in Kiwi land.

Post-Split Jake Gyllenhaal Mocks Ex-Girlfriend Natalie Portman

Jake Gyllenhaal had one of his famous exes in mind on Saturday -- no, not Taylor Swift, but Natalie Portman, who's now engaged (to Benjamin Millepied) and pregnant.

Presenting Portman (they were first linked in 2002 and were spotted on a date in 2006) with a Desert Palm Achievement Award for her role in Black Swan, Gyllenhaal good-naturedly laid into his Brothers costar.


"I first met Natalie at a Star Wars convention waiting in line for her to sign my Queen Amadala doll and I'm really hoping she wins the Oscar," Gyllenhaal, 29, joked, "Because if she does, then that doll is going to be worth a s***oad of money!"

The single-again actor continued of his expectant pal, 29: "She's recently announced that she's going to be a new mom to a child who will probably need therapy after seeing Black Swan," he said of the pitch-black psychological thriller about an emotionally disturbed ballerina.



He added that Portman's child "will most likely be gorgeous like his or her mom, even with a shaved head." (Portman went bald in V for Vendetta.)

Cracking up the crowd, the Love and Other Drugs actor likened Portman to "the Audrey Hepburn of our generation. She's graceful, has amazing eyebrows, and is talented, really short, funny, smart, dedicated, incredibly kind and Jewish!"



One minor hiccup in their friendship? Her vegan (no meat or dairy) diet. Explained Gyllenhaal: "It does get hard when you're out to dinner with her."

Shudder: Possession Kills by S.K.SAINI

For those who have been with me since I've started my blog, you already know that I am a paranormal freak, yes?

Also if anyone doesn't know, I am making a book series, it is crossed between the supernatural and goosebumps. I call it, Shudder by S.K.SAINI.

This one particular story, is one of the books. I call it, Shudder: Possession Kills by S.K.SAINI

Vancouver

Serena Parker and Hailey Chambers were walking back from dinner after celebrating Hailey’s 20th birthday. As the two girls were walking along the side of the footpath, Hailey sighed. Serena, who was walking ahead of her, stopped by the side of a busy intersection and looked back. Serena swished her long black hair and her dark brown eyes stared concerned for her best friend.

“What’s the matter” Serena said, as she stared at her best friend, wondering why on earth she was sad on the day of her birthday. Hailey looked at her smiling slightly, her baby blue eyes and short blonde hair illuminated from the street lights that shone brightly above.

“This is the greatest birthday I could ever have, Serena. Since my family died when I was younger, your parents took me in and you’ve been like a sister to me always,” Hailey smiled, showing her white but crooked teeth. “Thank you for everything today,”

Serena blushed slightly, and said that it was no problem. They stopped talking, and turned to look at the vehicles whizzing by like flies across the intersection.

Serena thought back to when she was only seven years old. She remembered clearly that her mother once took her aside to her bedroom for a little talk. She remembered her mother seating her down on her bed and telling her that there will be a girl with the same age coming to live with them. When asked whether she was going to stay here forever, her mother replied yes. Her mother told her the story of what had happened to Hailey’s family.



Hailey’s younger brother George was an autistic. One day when playing around with crayons in his bedroom, he had an epileptic fit. Her mother Samantha, who had come into his bedroom fifteen minutes later, quickly called her husband Fred who in turn told Hailey to stay in the house, drove both an unconscious George and weeping wife along to the hospital. According to the police reports and witnesses, their four wheel drive spun out of control after hitting an overloaded truck and exploded.

Hailey, who was also seven years old then, was taken into the custody of the police, while they tried to find other family members to take her. My mother, who happened to pass by the accident site, realized (after talking to a few frightened people) that there was a little orphan, who had no idea why she was there, or what had happened to her family. Out of pity, my mother went to the police station; spoke to the officer in charge who helped get her have custody of Hailey, because the police couldn’t find any family members...



A cold, icy wind snapped Serena out of her head; she pulled her coat up higher and shivered.

“You feel cold?” Hailey asked, but Serena ignored her and looked up at the sky. The sky was dark and eerie, the clouds were overcast and rain was starting spit down from the sky, just looking at it gave Serena the shivers. While looking at the sky, another large gust of wind blew at them. Both girls groaned.

“Just can’t wait to get out of this wind,” Serena said irritably, clenching her teeth together to stop them from chattering. She looked at Hailey who was standing still, her hand on the pole where the button for the traffic light was.

“So now Hailey, you’re twenty, single. What are you going to do with your life?” Serena said, trying to strike up a conversation. But Hailey didn’t answer, her hand was still holding the pole, her hand wrapped around the pole so tight, her knuckles were turning white. Serena waited a moment, and when Hailey still didn’t move, Serena touched her shoulder. Hailey span around so quickly that Serena jumped back in fright; Hailey was staring at her with –

Serena froze, staring at her best friend with her mouth gaping open in shock. Hailey’s eyes were pure white, where the pupil should be, there was only blankness. Serena tried to speak, but the words wouldn’t come out of her mouth. She looked at Hailey again but more closely, her face was expressionless, it was just blank. It reminded Serena of the horror movie ‘Children of the Corn’. Finally finding her voice, Serena spoke cautiously.

“H-Hailey?” Serena said nervously, trying to avoid looking at her eyes. Hailey still didn’t move, nor did she utter a word. She was standing there like she was in a trance, or perhaps like she didn’t know she was there or who she was. Then without warning, at the same time sending a chill up Serena’s spine, Hailey spoke. It wasn’t the sweet and kind voice of her best friend, but a harsh and spine chilling voice spoke from within her.

“Let’s play a game,” She said it so coldly, that Serena stepped back a little, afraid that Hailey might attack her. When Serena didn’t say anything, the voice in Hailey continued to speak. “I’ll stand on the road, and if I don’t get hit, then you will get a reward,”

Serena stood on the asphalt baffled, her mouth opened in surprise as Hailey stepped out onto the road. Serena didn’t know what to do. Whatever spoke from Hailey’s mouth, wasn’t normal nor human.

“Hailey?” Serena said in a small voice, scared to speak any louder. “Get off the road before you get yourself killed,” But Hailey just laughed, the hairs on Serena’s back stood up and she shuddered slightly. The thing inside Hailey took another step onto the road, the cars not even stopping as they saw a woman about to walk right into a busy intersection.

“This is the perfect place to play this game,” There was still no expression on her face. Serena’s heart was beating frantically inside her chest.

“Hailey please –“ But before Serena could finish her sentence, a hiss came out of Hailey’s mouth, like a snake about to attack its prey, and her face transformed into a snarl.



Even with Serena’s frantic pleas, Hailey was now standing in the middle of the road. Serena was surprised that she wasn’t hit by a car right there. She seemed to have walked there like she didn’t know how to use her legs, like someone else other than Hailey was forcing it to move. Serena tried to speak again, but only a choke of protest came out. What made Serena even more fearful was that Hailey was smiling, a malice smile that spread across her beautiful face. Then she looked at something which made her smile even wider. When Serena trailed her eyes to what Hailey was looking at, her whole heart froze again in screaming terror.

Not too far away, a large semi-trailer was speeding across the road towards the intersection, right where Hailey was standing. Without even thinking, without even caring for her own life, Serena ran onto the road, dodging the cars that were speeding by and grabbed Hailey’s arm.

“Get off!” snarled Hailey, as she pulled her arm away from Serena with incredible and unexpected force. But Serena couldn’t care and made another grab for her arm again.

“No!” screamed Serena loudly, tugging at her best friends arm to move her. “I’m not letting you do this!” Hailey then unexpectedly grabbed Serena and threw her hard onto the pavement, hitting her head.

Before Serena passed out, before the truck smashed into Hailey, Serena saw a look of fear in Hailey’s eyes. A cry of protest trying to come out of her mouth.

“HAILEY!”


This is still in draft, but please tell me what you think of it. And if there is anything off, please tell me how I can fix it. :)

S.K.SAINI